vince Posted November 21, 2007 Share Posted November 21, 2007 Everything is finally done. Please be honest and tell me what you guys think. thanks www.servspider.com 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scurrell Posted November 21, 2007 Share Posted November 21, 2007 Everything is finally done. Please be honest and tell me what you guys think.thanks www.servspider.com I like the site, but for Gods sake rewrite that About Us page. I've never read such a load of unintelligible gobbledy-gook in my entire IT career. Keep it simple. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 21, 2007 Author Share Posted November 21, 2007 I like the site, but for Gods sake rewrite that About Us page. I've never read such a load of unintelligible gobbledy-gook in my entire IT career. Keep it simple. Thanks for your honesty every criticism helps in my case. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 22, 2007 Author Share Posted November 22, 2007 Alright simplified about us page. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robbo Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 I also think you need to add some paragraphing into the About Us page. I took one look and turned off the page. Also the index page text at the bottom is a block of something I don't want to have to work to read it. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 22, 2007 Author Share Posted November 22, 2007 I also think you need to add some paragraphing into the About Us page. I took one look and turned off the page. Also the index page text at the bottom is a block of something I don't want to have to work to read it. Sorry i don't understand what you mean by the bottom is a block of something??? Thanks for your review 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinoguin Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 looks great, the whmcs fitted in well with the template 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 22, 2007 Author Share Posted November 22, 2007 looks great, the whmcs fitted in well with the template Thanks for your comment, much appreciated. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robbo Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 Sorry i don't understand what you mean by the bottom is a block of something??? Thanks for your review Well basically it just looks "busy". If I was a potential customer, I would look at it and think it was too hard to read. Theres no paragraphing to it. The part I'm talking about is We offer Reseller and Web Hosting solutions to establish your web presence at prices you can afford! Our web hosting plans are designed with premium features at great prices. etc etc That's my opinion anyway. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlGirl Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 Looks nice Vince. My only suggestion is to adjust the stylesheet so the colors of WHMCS matches the shade of green of your site instead of the default blue. Otherwise, nice integration. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 22, 2007 Author Share Posted November 22, 2007 Well basically it just looks "busy". If I was a potential customer, I would look at it and think it was too hard to read. Theres no paragraphing to it.The part I'm talking about is That's my opinion anyway. Looks nice Vince. My only suggestion is to adjust the stylesheet so the colors of WHMCS matches the shade of green of your site instead of the default blue. Otherwise, nice integration. Thanks for the suggestion and taking the time to post something. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
generic Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 i would use a color matching program like color schemer to pick colors for support that compliment your current design. The stock colors on whmcs clash with your site. for instance rather than the default light blue of #EFF2F9, try this: #CDD8D9 and for the rollover try this: #93A1AD. these are pulled from the grey in your design and would match a lot better. like your design a lot, just need to work on the colors of whmcs to compliment it now. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robbo Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 I wasn't trying to be rude Vince, it was more of a prospective customers view. I know myself when I design sites, I have to get the second opinion of someone that doesn't design, a "prospective" customer I guess. I do like the design by the way. Nice and clean, and agree with the other users about colour scheme in the WHMCS part 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vince Posted November 23, 2007 Author Share Posted November 23, 2007 i would use a color matching program like color schemer to pick colors for support that compliment your current design. The stock colors on whmcs clash with your site. for instance rather than the default light blue of #EFF2F9, try this: #CDD8D9 and for the rollover try this: #93A1AD. these are pulled from the grey in your design and would match a lot better. like your design a lot, just need to work on the colors of whmcs to compliment it now. Thanks for the suggestions as im taking note of all of them. I wasn't trying to be rude Vince, it was more of a prospective customers view. I know myself when I design sites, I have to get the second opinion of someone that doesn't design, a "prospective" customer I guess. I do like the design by the way. Nice and clean, and agree with the other users about colour scheme in the WHMCS part Oh i didn't take your comments as being rude at all. I just want honest opinions on improving the design. Cheers 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camotec Posted November 25, 2007 Share Posted November 25, 2007 I like your header graphics and layout. very nice. just change those colour like the other guys said before to tie WHMCS into your design. I agree to what was said before, I recommend re-writing the about page again, and maybe get someone to go over it and correct grammar etc. Just so you come across professional. My only other gripe is.... and I am picking here. the Intel logo is the really old one, go to Intel's website and grab the new one. they even have press information and logos for download. so you can make sure your representing the company correctly. as I say just picking but i think it is important to convey yourself as professional if thats what your trying to be. Regards Ben Camilleri Camotec Web Solutions ( Under a rework now that I have WHMCS ) 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IHC Posted November 26, 2007 Share Posted November 26, 2007 Very very nice. I love sites who make only that what is needed and no advertising. Keep it up. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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